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Dusk turned to dark
and the dark turned to dawn
i am still awaking and counting your sins
too many missed calls and bargains with god
only for me to fight harder for your affection

and i can reach out and call to you
but you\'ve shoved the distance farther
between us

shores between seas have less miles between them
than our hearts do these days
all your fears flung me to a world
that couldnt touch the castle of your soul

and i can reach out and call to you
but you\'ve shoved the distance farther
between us

coldness grew with time
so much yet so little to say
strangers know each other
more deeply than we do these days

and i can reach out and call to you
but you\'ve shoved the distance farther
between us

you have shoved that distance farther between us
©2003-2009 ~littlemyer
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this is the story of the two of us growing apart- not so much by my choice, than his

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:icongabriel198:
thats really nice, good flow and sincere, would go well with a slow kind of melody on guitar or somthing, nice work
:iconintermittently:
Wow. I love that poem....just great is all I can say :) (Smile) I love visual references in poetry...painting a picture to the story is what I love to do, and you did it well.
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wow smut...thats a really amazing poem...im adding that to my +fav ....your imagery in this is...:jawdropped:
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-

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June 4, 2003

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